Using unconventional formats, in small amounts

Unconventional formats are story structures that eschew the typical narrative flow of traditional formats, such as the three-act play, the Hero’s Journey, or Save the Cat. They are often less concerned with chronological time flow. And they can allow for modes of communications that are much more casual or much more formal, which can be more revealing or less revealing, depending on the device used. 

Unconventional formats include vehicles such as:

  • Letters, postcards, emails, and DMs (epistolary novels)
  • Diary entries
  • Obituaries
  • Blog posts
  • Social media posts and forum threads
  • AI prompts and outputs
  • Outlines
  • Transcripts and scripts
  • Legal forms
  • Police reports, disciplinary reports, case reports, and progress reports
  • Recipes
  • Instruction manuals
  • Lists

How I use these in my sci-fi trilogy

While entire stories can be written in these unconventional formats, I’ve enjoyed weaving them into my sci-fi trilogy (Project T.A.G.) to change up the storytelling mode. For instance, in book 1, a messenger delivers a letter that a character reads, reacting to every few sentences. Later, the MMC writes a letter home, commenting to himself as he goes about all the details he’s not including.

In book 2, the MFC struggles to write a letter to her father, saying too much and then editing it down to its simplest, irrefutable core. That rewriting process shows readers details and feelings that would have otherwise stayed hidden had only the final letter been included.

In book 3, one of the antagonists edits video content, including using strikethroughs to indicate word changes in the script. And later, to show the passage of time, one of the government leaders reads monthly tournament ranking reports—which is what I’m working on right now.


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What’s in my 683 pages of book notes

In addition to my book files, I have a separate book notes file for Project: T.A.G., my dystopian sci-fi trilogy. That file is currently 683 pages, and includes over 100,000 words of copy I’ve cut or substantially rewritten, but wanted to save. The remaining 50,000 words are focused on two very different aspects of the project:

Continuity & story details

  • Information about each of the two superpowers, the Union of Nations and the Global Assembly, including the national anthems I wrote for them
  • Cast list, including details on appearance, backgrounds, motivations, mannerisms, speech patterns, etc.
  • A timeline that goes from 2048 to 2116, even though the action in each book takes place over a year or less, academy-style, between 2104 and 2106 over the course of the three books in the series
  • Locations around the world where scenes take place
  • A list of all weapons, equipment, and technologies used by characters
  • Themes for each book
  • A list of mirror scenes and echoes
  • The playlist for each book

Publication & marketing plans

  • Comparable books
  • Back cover copy and flap copy (book description, bio, etc.)
  • Potential blurb contributors
  • Notes on book cover concepts
  • Website updates to make, including creating an electronic press kit
  • Pre-publication launch marketing plan
  • Post-publication marketing plan

Along with my book notes, I have a separate spreadsheet to track my querying efforts. I also have a separate doc to plan my blog and social media content that has a running list of topics and draft posts for this trilogy and the next four novels I have planned.


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WIP update

📚 Project: T.A.G.

Dystopian new adult near-future sci-fi trilogy

Book 1 

📗 Manuscript complete!

✍️ 90,000 words, 23 chapters

▶️ With developmental editor 📝

I was querying agents, but decided to pivot and work with a developmental editor before doing any more. 

Book 2

📕 Draft complete!

✍️ 100,000 words, 27 chapters

▶️ Out with final beta reader 📤

Waiting to hear back from my last beta reader. Will then hand it off to developmental editor.

Book 3

📘 Work in progress…

✍️ 37,000 words, 11 chapters

▶️ Goal to finish draft by end of year 🥂

Finishing by year-end may be a stretch, given all the work I’ve been doing on book 1 with my developmental editor. However, I’ve now done a detailed outline of the final book, which may give me the momentum I need. Fingers crossed.


📚 Project: W.A.

Utopian interstellar sci-fi trilogy

Books 1, 2, and 3

💡 Ideation, with 13,000 words of book notes


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My sci-fi novel is now in the hands of a developmental editor

After multiple rounds of edits, including feedback from my alpha reader and beta readers, I’ve handed book 1 of my dystopian sci-fi trilogy off to a developmental editor. The scope of what a developmental editor does varies, but here’s what mine will deliver:

  • An overview of the strengths and weaknesses of the novel’s plot, setting, and characters
  • An analysis of my writing, including areas for improvements and specific ways to strengthen the manuscript
  • An analysis of the target audience for my novel
  • A detailed analysis of the plot and structure of the story, including the beginning and end, identification of any plot holes, completeness of the worldbuilding, a discussion of story themes, effectiveness of plot twists, and more
I found my developmental editor on Reedsy

In addition to that feedback, which will add up to 20 pages or more, my developmental editor will share in-line suggestions related to the plot, setting, and characters. And once I’ve had time to ingest all of that, I’ll have some consultative time with them to talk out the less-clear changes and other things I’m wrestling with.

While I’m confident my novel is ready for this level of scrutiny, I’m still nervous about what I’ll hear back. Wish me luck!


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7 questions you should be able to answer before working with a developmental editor


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Is it okay to use emojis in books?

Better yet: Is it wise to use emojis in books?

My dystopian sci-fi trilogy has an AI character that routinely uses emojis as part of its digital dialogue, and in the first book, it uses the nine emojis highlighted below. It’s one of the things that makes his dialogue unique.

But after writing it, I wondered if there were downsides to using emojis in books. After some research, here are some key issues people brought up, plus my thoughts:

  1. Books are printed in black, with few exceptions. This does make emojis less visually appealing, and perhaps less recognizable, too.
  2. The need to license an emoji font. I was initially using Segoe UI Emoji, which definitely has to be licensed. However, I found a comparable Google Font, Noto Emoji. All Google Fonts are open source, so I made the switch.
  3. Longevity and dating a book. Emojis are definitely a product of their time. That can be both good and bad. Emojis are a big part of casual modern communication, so they’d help reinforce a 2010’s and 2020’s setting. Beyond that, though, I’d argue that some emojis have well-established meanings that are likely to persist. For instance, it’s hard for me to imagine the eggplant emoji’s meaning changing at this point. It’s also difficult to imagine emojis falling out of the lexicon anytime soon, as language tends toward brevity and ease, something that’s evident with slang today.
  4. Clarity and shifting meanings. My eggplant emoji example aside, there are plenty of instances where the meaning of an emoji has changed. Also, a reader may not even be aware of the meaning of well-established emojis, especially if they’re from another culture. However, is that any different from a reader encountering a word or pop culture reference they’re unfamiliar with? As long as it’s not an overly frequent occurrence, they’ll just guess at the meaning by using context clues and move on. The same will be true for unfamiliar emojis.
  5. Audio book verbalization. If you’re doing an audio book version, this is definitely something to consider. Some emojis have cumbersome names, and that’s in addition to having to say “emoji” after each name. However, why not exercise some creative license? For instance, in the Noto Emoji font, the eggplant emoji is called “Aubergine.” But in the audio book script, I’ll just specify that it be called “eggplant emoji.” Same thing with Noto Emoji’s “Fisted Hand Sign,” which I’ll change to “fist bump emoji” in the script for greater clarity.

While those are all reasons to be thoughtful and constrained in your use of emojis, none of those are reasons to eliminate emojis from your writer’s toolbox. In the first book of my trilogy, emojis represented fewer than 20 characters out of more than 420,000 characters. That seems pretty constrained, while adding some levity and characterization.


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When world powers start aligning to match your novel’s dystopian vision

The Union of Nations assembles? India’s Modi met with Putin and Xi

In my dystopian near-future sci-fi trilogy, the world is aligned around two superpowers:

  1. The Global Assembly, which is composed of North America, Europe, and Oceania, but with leadership centralized in the former United States; and 
  2. The Union of Nations, which is centered on China, Russia, and India, but also includes Africa and South America.

If you’ve been following the news the past few days, you’ve seen an unusual meeting between President Vladimir V. Putin of Russia, President Xi Jinping of China, and Prime Minister Narendra Modi of India. Putin and Xi meeting isn’t uncommon, as they’re close allies, but Modi is new to the mix.

While India had been benefiting greatly from American companies shifting manufacturing out of China, President Trump has thrown US-India relations in turmoil since he took office. He’s not only strained relations with India by trying to take credit for the ceasefire between India and Pakistan, but he’s imposed 50% tariffs on India because they buy oil from Russia. This is forcing India to choose between the West and the East, and it looks like India is turning to China and Russia as alternatives to the US market.

Dystopian stories are fundamentally warnings, so my hope is this realignment is short-lived. With that in mind, you might be wondering, what might be the next step down the dark road of my dystopian vision? It would be the US withdrawing from or being kicked out of the United Nations, which then ultimately evolves into the Union of Nations.


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